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Warehouse I made for (T)DM.
- acerspyro
- robin
- wee_zr
Thanks guys.
Last edited by Cisoun (2014-11-24 09:45:48)
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My first impressions of this map are pretty so-so. It Some sections have pretty poor flow, and the lighting is really dark in some sections. I like the aesthetic however, and there has been a lot of attention to detail put into this map. My favorite area is definitely the upstairs office area, with my least favorite being the downstairs warehouse.
All in all, it's a pretty good effort, but I would put more focus on gameplay next time.
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Thank you for the typo in my username.
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Pritchard : Yeah, it was intended to be dark at some places. I always like some dark spots but I can understand you don't. It's my first my map but I will consider your remarks. Thanks !
acerspyro : My bad buddy, I'm gonna fix that and jump through my window. Hold my beer.
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the lighting is really dark in some sections
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Last edited by reaven5566 (2014-12-01 07:32:01)
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I will play it and give you small review with suggestions both as singleplayer map and multiplayer one.
I'm thinking about making this like a hobby of mine anyone who makes maps i'll give you reviews.
I've been tinkering around with this game and engine for a while now. Might as well start contributing.
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OK,
First of all wonderful small map, i really like the storage area and how u can see your enemies thru glass windows, spawns can be seen from the other side :3
Theres just a few things that are missing (ideas for the future version? :) )
Sounds, those servers should be humming man lol, maybe a muffled sounds to to room where the Hangar logo is and few more places, like background noises to the room with the boxes
Bots get stuck on some boxes in the box room, i guess its more of an actual game AI issue but perhaps make sure they dont get stuck, move some stuff around?
Contrasts, everything good ever has contrast, 2 or more stuff that compliment each other, like colors blue and orange, right now we have rooms/corridors with single colors, perhaps add some orange chairs under the blue light, just an idea
Otherwise really nice looking map
Last edited by ThaOneDon (2014-11-06 11:43:50)
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